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About this scrapbook page:
This is my Daughter Riley at her 3rd Birthday at grandma'a pumpkin patch.

"This page is in the Critique Me challenge. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve this page. Any comment that does not follow this request will be deleted. Thanks!"

Design credits:
Scrapbook Max
Comments for the scrapbook:
Pixelpia says:
Lovely pictures and colors you choosen with this kit goes well with the theme of them, But for the Critique Me challange I will share my ideas.
I would chose one common component for all pages in the scrapbook, e.g. the framing or matting of the photos. I like the green matting with eyelets on the first page and that could have been used on the photos on all three pages as well as journaling.
Jan 7, 2009
Late_Bloomer says:
These are all so stunning !!!~ 10cp.
Nov 9, 2008
Tmyers810 says:
These pages are very good. I love how you scrapped all of them:)
Oct 25, 2008

Comments for this page: (view all 53 comments)
jezebel_ro says:
I hate to do this but...here we go:may i suggest a less busy background amd maybe just a touch of shadow to the picture overall is a wonderful page,10chp.
Jan 7, 2009
wonderful pages 10+10+
Oct 31, 2008
triazzle says:
very cute photo and page
Oct 25, 2008
ositafotografa says:
Cute page!
Oct 23, 2008
Hilda Designs says:
A cute page!
Hugs from Brazil,
Oct 23, 2008
Eliza kitty says:

Terrific page, excellent job!
Oct 23, 2008
overseasnana says:
love your Fall themed page, taking kids to a pumpkin patch produces the best pictures too.
Oct 22, 2008
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